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coprime_recs ([personal profile] coprime_recs) wrote2004-06-06 03:57 pm

Angel: Undone by Minim Calibre

Undone (Doyle/Cordelia | PG | 1,000 words) is four snapshots of Doyle and Cordelia's relationship. Some parts are cute and hopeful while others are grief-striken and remorseful. The snapshots capture all the important parts about this relationship.

Excerpt:
"You named your horse Keanu?"

"Well, yeah." She pours herself another shot. "He was a really handsome horse."

"Not much of an actor though, I take it?"

Cordelia punches him lightly in the arm. "I'm sharing my pain with you. This way, you can open up about your pain, and I can comfort you."

"Your pain's a horse named Keanu, princess? I'm not sure I can compete with that."

"Right now, I think my pain's named Doyle, and it's in my ass." Oh man, that came out really wrong. "I mean, you're a pain in my... that is." The bastard's snickering at her. And she thinks it's kind of cute. When she sobers up, this is going to be one of those what were you thinking moments, just like all the ones involving Xander Harris.

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